Saturday, April 14, 2007

FATHOMS

When I feel the cold breeze across my face
I wonder if, on yours, it left a trace
‘Coz I feel your touch in the breeze
Wonder with what force, my soul, you seize.

Forgive me,
No matter what I do,
I can never stop loving you.

In the first showers of the rain,
I lay bare all my pain.
To kill thoughts which never leave me at ease,
And forever live on our memories.

Forgive me,
No matter what I do,
I can never stop loving you.

And when I see the golden sky,
I know for sure my heart wont lie.
My eyes relish the setting sun between the palms,
While an aching heart longs to be in your arms.

Forgive me,
No matter what I do,
I can never stop loving you.

How once you looked like everybody,
And now everybody looks like you.
The harder I try to forget you,
The more I fall in love with you.

Forgive me,
No matter what I do,
I can never stop loving you.

I wouldn’t ask you how, I wouldn’t ask you why,
I wouldn’t ask you to give us a second try.
For I know our love is and forever will be true,
For it is in your darkest times that my love for you will brew.

Forgive me,
No matter what I do,
I can never stop loving you.

Life feels empty without you,
I badly want to hear that you love me too
But you have decided to leave,
But this will forever be my belief,

Forgive me,
No matter what I do,
I can never stop loving you.
The poems incomplete…. And I don’t think I can complete it. Just a feel of how life will be without ‘my life’….
Ok cheer up people…no sob sobs allowed here!(and yes everythings fine!..lolz!)
Just reminded of something my mom told me a few days back…
No one around has the capability to hurt you….and I want remember this always!!!

5 comments:

Ambastha said...

oki....
amazin manc...
u havnt written better...bt that wud mean ur othr writings arent as gud...btis dat true..???bt it also doesnt mean dat tis d same.....as d rest that u have written...
bt real gud...
bt then thats how the rest were....
amazin...????same re.....all othr are amazin too.....
u actually need comments for ur poem....well how bout.....

wid setting stars will come d beleif
that one day this turbulence shall ease
and in that light u may see....
the love was nt only me, bt it was thee......

Sharanya said...

its quite good...but its sooo sad!!but it expresses ur feelings..perfectly.good work...try something happy next time!!

Sharanya said...

MANSI!UPDATE!

Thona said...

Hey mansi.. i came here to comment on your poemm.. but after readin ankur's lines.. i feel like commenting on them first... such trully amazin and complete reply!.. wow.. i luv u guys... wish i cud rite like that :-(... I guess words can really b shaped by the intensity and sincerity of one's feelings

Unknown said...

Forgive me,
and just let it be...

Cant see you sad,
I know i am damn bad...

still life has its sorrows,
happiness is all i want to borrow...



LOL !.. i just rhymed there girl... still beautifully written .. remember u gotta send me ur poems via mail right... i know i cant write as well as u.. :D... right?

god bless !